ANGEL EYESbyGerald DiPegoOctober 1999Seventh Draft/PolishFOR EDUCATIONALPURPOSES ONLYFADE IN:EXT. CITY STREETS (LOS ANGELES) - NIGHTCREDIT SEQUENCE.As OPENING CREDITS play, we study the city’s nighttimepulse, ribbons of headlights moving and cross-connectinglike blood through the veins of a body --impressionistic, even beautiful, but what we’re hearingis soulful trumpet-based MUSIC, mellow and haunting, themodern classic -- JAZZ sound of a Wynton Marsalis,putting a voice to our story. As CREDITS END, we...DISSOLVE TO:POV - EXT. FREEWAY - NIGHTNow the MUSIC is GONE, SOUNDS are MUFFLED and visionblurred. We get the impression of urgent movement. Wehear BREATHING. There are VOICES, SHOUTS, even SCREAMS,but MUFFLED, far away. Only the breathing is distinct.We come to realize it is our breathing, and we are insidesomeone, looking out. The man whose POV this is is onthe edge of consciousness and not far from death. Helies on the pavement of a freeway at the site of anaccident only minutes after impact.His VISION goes IN and OUT of clarity. People areswarming around him and rushing by toward the carnage ofwrecked vehicles. A SIREN BLOOMS in the distance andapproaches haltingly. The man slips away, comes backtoward consciousness, slips again.The crowd around the downed man parts to allow passage toa police officer. It is a woman, Officer SHARON POGUE,LAPD. She kneels at the man’s side, taking charge,speaking, but we hear only SLIVERS of SOUND. He sees herface clearly now, close above him.Sharon is a dedicated professional and more. We see downinto her to a place of real caring. She stares into oureyes and connects. We begin to hear her now -- and thereare more SIRENS converging in b.g.SHARONCan you hear me?(shouting, off)This one’s conscious!VOICE (O.S.)Paramedics on the way!We are slipping away again. Sharon holds us with hereyes, and she grips our hand.(CONTINUED)2.CONTINUED:SHARONWait. Wait. Listen to me. Canyou feel that?She holds on tight. We see that our hand, held in herown, is bloody.SHARONThat’s my hand. Hold it. Go on-- as hard as you can.We watch our hand gripping hers, and as we hold on, thesights and sounds around us grow more clear.SHARONIt’s over, and I’ve got you, andyou’re safe. You’re safe now.You got that? Don’t let go.Don’t let me go.But our eyes unlock from Sharon’s and DRIFT TO a patch ofnight sky. Her voice fades awawy. Our POV begins TOLIFT, MOVING TOWARD that sky, as the blue-black nightbegins to turn white. We GO INTO that white light and...DISSOLVE TO:EXT. LOS ANGELES CITYSCAPE - DAYWe PICK OUT a police car from the traffic and FOLLOW.The beat being patrolled is a mixed neighborhood withsome very rough edges.INT. POLICE CAR - DAYOfficer Sharon Pogue is driving the car. It is two yearssince we saw her at the accident site. Her partner,ROBBY LEWIS, sips coffee and keeps one eye on the CADmonitor which lists all area police calls. She slowsbehind a car that is crawling along, an old 60s car,driven by a young man and woman who sit very close on thebench seat. The car’s ENGINE is MISSING and smoking.SHARONThat car is older than they are.ROBBY’67 Chevy Impala.SHARONThat’s what I said.(CONTINUED)3.CONTINUED:ROBBYNeeds a servicing.SHARONDon’t we all.Robby nearly spits his coffee, laughing at what Sharonhas said and trying not to choke. Sharon smiles, shakingher head.SHARONGet it together, officer.As Robby smiles, Sharon looks ahead at the young couplewho each have an arm around the other. She is strokinghis neck. He is making gentle circles in her hair.Sharon watches this, and for a moment her eyes reveal adepth that may be loneliness, but she quickly pushes herthoughts away and hits the HORN, startling Robby andstartling the people ahead who now disengage and driveon.ROBBYJesus, Pogo! Almost spilled mycoffee again! You didn’t like hishair, or what?SHARONI love Elvis hair. They weregoing two damn miles an hour.But Robby’s eyes have caught something on the monitor.ROBBYLet’s roll to this -- fight inprogress.As Robby secures that coffee cup, Sharon hits the SIRENand speeds around the car in front of them.EXT. CITY STREET - DAYAt the same time, a few blocks away, an OLD, FRAIL MAN iscarrying two plastic grocery bags that are too heavy forhim.Walking behind this man is a younger man named CATCHLAMBERT, an attractive man with some scarring on hisface. His eyes, deep down, are haunted by something, butthere is energy in his step. He is dressed in a relaxedand stylish manner, not expensive. He begins to pick uphis pace to catch up to the old man.(CONTINUED)4.CONTINUED:People glance at Catch, nad he glances back in an openand unflinching way, ready for anything, a smile, a nod,or -- because these are some of L.A.’s mean streets -- athreatening or taunting look. These he also meetsopenly, without a trace of fear. The man has beenthrough some kind of fire, and it has left him differentfrom us. Outside the usual boundaries.Catch walks beside the Old Man, glancing at him.Finally, the man glances back, wondering and suspicious,but Catch has a slight, disarming smile, open and honest.CATCHY’know... since we’re both walkingthe same way, I could take one ofthose bags for you. That way, Ido some upper body work while I’mwalking along. Helps my back.What d’you say?The Old Man trudges on, proud and suspicious, too.CATCHRight now your mind’s makingpictures of me robbing yourgroceires, but, y’know, nine timesout of ten, people do the rightthing.The Old Man glances at him, still not convinced, but hesoon has to stop and rest. Catch stops, too. The oldman looks at him, a bit embarrassed.OLD MANIt’s the dog food that makes it soheavy.Catch nods, puts out his hand. The Old Man hesitates,then decides and lifts a bag, and Catch takes it.CATCHI guess it’s worth it... for agood dog.Catch isn’t kidding. He has that honesty. The Old Mannods and starts trudging again. As they walk ontogether, Catch reaches for that second bag. The manrelents and lets him take it. They continue on, Catchcarrying the bags and every now and then lifting them abit for his upper body work.5.EXT. VIDEO GAME ROOM - DAYThis is the call Sharon and Robby have sped to. It is achaotic scene of cops breaking up a fight between eightboys, 16-20. A big KID, 18 or so, is being pulled offanother by Sharon and Robby. The Kid is wild andresisting and Sharon shows her toughness andprofessionalism and some anger, too, as she slams himinto a fence -- and Robby holds him while she cuffs theyoung man -- who is very mouthy, playing to his friends.KIDLook at this bitch. Whoo! Benny,look at this!Sharon and Robby are both very good at their jobs, takingthis Kid to their car while other cops contain the rest.A crowd watches -- mostly teens.KID(to Sharon)You come in with me. Hey, bitch.Some of his bystanders friends howl at that.KIDYou’re going to arrest me, youcome into the back seat with me.Come on!He resists a bit, but they’re getting him into the car.KIDCome on. We’ll have a good time.INT. POLICE CAR - DAY (FEW MINUTES LATER)Sharon’s on the radio to dispatch as Robby drives and theKid keeps mouthing off.SHARON(to radio)Three Adam Five -- show us 1019 tothe jail with one male prisoner.KID
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